Well in the dog one it has a part that they sent of the dog that it looked weird and they had a normal picture of dog or a shooting one where the guy had a shotgun and bullets wrapped around him and its just a guy in a hoodie.
Now with the no making sense why or how the texts are sent like on the blind kid one he picks up light and movement, well one your phone makes lift to see the screen and two you have to move a bit to text someone. And some of them are like oh no he found me let me text who Ive been converting with during this whole ordeal while Im runny from who or what is trying to kill me. Im giving it one star because some stories end on a good open ended note
mr. statefarm about Yarn - Chat & Text Stories, v1.6.0