Inane and Unpolished

The stories in Yarn are infrequently compelling though there are SOME decent ones. Some even violate the format of "text exchange:" one of a girl thinking to herself about what she might text her crush, one of friends on a road trip trying to pick up an urban legend ghost hitchhiker. Those people would not be using text to communicate.

There are also times when the stories have more stage direction than just "5 min later." That again defies the format. Also just put a time stamp and we can figure out that time has passed...

Lastly, there are innumerable spelling/word choice errors. If youre going to be a subscription service, at least proof read.

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